Thursday, October 21, 2010
Less rerview, more detail.
When I first started writing the essay, it was more of a summary rather than an in depth essay on my blogger's identity. I need to pick out little things, mainly quotes, from the posts and turn them into concrete detail about Andrew's identity as a nerd. Now that I've finally decided on his true blog identity, I think it will be easier to make my paper more detailed and concise.
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That's too funny, cause I know I need quotes too! You had a great start when I read your paper. At least you now have a good idea of where you're going now its just a matter of cementing it together and getting all the evidence to back it up. I'm actually glad that we had the writing conferences it gave me some light to what we were writing about. I can't wait to see how your paper transforms!
ReplyDeleteThe quotes are always a good place to start. In my essay, rather than planning out pieces of it and trying to force quotes to fit into those pieces, I picked a few quotes and planned the rest of my essay around those. This strategy helped to keep my paper on topic and not rambling to get those quotes to fit in some obscure way.
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