Thursday, November 4, 2010
Reflection of my essay.
My essay is coming along pretty well, I'd say. I think that I've read over it a lot and need a new pair of eyes to read it again. The writing conference really helped, and I think another advice session like that would help. The length is fine, the layout is fine, but I still need to work on my citations and possibly word choice. I think my thesis is much stronger after the presentation feedback, and I'm overall pretty happy with it. There have been major improvements to my intro since draft one, and I think it's close to being ready for a final grade after a bit more editing.
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If you want, I'll take a look at your next essay if you want Jamie. From what I remember, your presentation was very interesting and that is primarily because I listen in on MuggleCast regularly. Send me your essay at wheelj4@u.washington.edu when you get a chance please, I'm interested in reading yours.
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