Revising

Revision in necessary, but challenging. First drafts are usually rough, and essays can always be improved, which is why revision is so important, it's never finished. Honestly, I hate revising. I know it's important, but I'm not very good at it. I end up changing everything and making things more complicated. I know my essay needs to be revised desperately, but I feel like sometimes I change too much. Hopefully since I wasn't the only one revising it, I'll have an easier time picking out which parts need the most work.